Lupin Ilano's registration

Character Name:
Lupin Ilano

Character Type:
Hero

Desired Element:
Light

Village:
City of Virtue

Age:
58 (17 physically)

Rank:
Master Knight of Aranov

Gender:
Male

Equipment
Lupin has a single sword, made from base silver. He also has a golden bracelet that can open up into a shield.

Appearance:
Avatar pic

Character Personality:
Lupin is a virtuous man who is very empathic and can read people well, this makes him very good at making friends. He has no strong emotions and is wise beyond his age (chronologically and physically). He is strong hearted and sees the goodness in all people, as well as the evil, which he seeks to vavnquish from hearts of whom he holds dear. He knows about seven different languages and is good at an armory. He is the kind of person who enjoys reading books, be it fiction, religion, history, or even just informational writings.

Background Information:
He was born and raised in a small village town, he was one of the few that was born with a special stone. He had an older brother by 6 years and so looked up to him. It was when he was 14 and his brother 20, when he discovered his brother was part of a circle of dark druids, he was scarred emotionally from this. He was later broken by his brother when he lead an assault on his home town and surrounding areas, Lupin ran off into the forests for miles with tears building in his eyes, when he fell upon a dragon of his age, that saw him in his sorrow, and took his stone. The two bonded and have always been together to this day. Lupin and his dragon Venku have been working together helping out people in need for reward or not as of late. Lupin has never lost a sword duel, this is likely due to the fact that he decides rather to not fight, but when it came to it, he still won over every opponent.

I'll give this a temporary approval, I need Fuden to give this a double check as he should be better at checking registration.

Has been run over by Fuden, your registration has been denied for the following reasons:

1). Character and background information do not have enough valid sentences. (5 for character info and 7 for background info)
2). No one is allowed to have any enchanted equipment at the start, only basic equipment.
3). The commas make confusing sentences.

Once these reasons are changed, an approval will be issued.